完善雅思写作的三大策略

智课网 IELTS 备考资料完善雅思写作的三大策略摘要:小马过河名师认为:一味地追求句子的长度有时反而会牺牲句子的 “ 可读性 ” ,特别是对一些基础一般 的学生来说,有时生硬地追求长句反而破坏了句子

智课网 IELTS 备考资料 完善雅思写作的三大策略 摘要:小马过河名师认为:一味地追求句子的长度有时反而会牺牲句子的 “可读 性” ,特别是对一些基础一般 的学生来说,有时生硬地追求长句反而破坏了句子的 句法准确性。下面我们看看帮你写出完美雅思作文的三条 妙计,并且通过一些例子, 体会一些写得并不成功的长句和如何修改的建议: 妙计一:避免空洞的单词和词组 1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全 可以被删掉。比如下面的句子: When all things are considered ,young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion. 这句话当中的 “when all things are considered ”和 “in my opinion “都显得多 余。完全可以去掉。改为: Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents. 2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如: Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time. “due to the fact that ”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简 化为下面的表达方式: Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now. 妙计二:避免重复