英文作文修改技巧解析

英文作文修改技巧解析 　　四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分 　　三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6

英文作文修改技巧解析 四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思 想。可得0-2分 三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构 不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6 处语法或拼写错误； 字数缺乏。可得3-5分 二档文：内容完整，重点描述比拟充分，层次结构比拟清晰， 语言比拟流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要 求。可得6-8分 一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结 构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写 错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分 atrip to the zoo yesterday way sunday and it was afine day.so itake a trip to the zoo. iwent there by bus, iget there at 8:00 am.there are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, others watched the bids,i saw many animals and itool many phtos. that’s ainteresting trip. i’ll never forget it. that’s my trip. it was asunny sunday after aquick breakfast ,i couldn’t wait to get on the bus. this is my first time to enjoy atrip alone. varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo! as soon as igot there, iwas attracted at once. monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. sometimes they